Once upon a time, I was reading yet
another modern cookie cutter urban fantasy novel, and I was loving
it. This one was about descendants of gods with superfluously sexy
powers and iridescent facial tattoos. I got to a point in the book
where a clue was dropped if you were clever enough to notice it. I
was. And I was feeling pretty sassy about it. I started thinking,
“I wonder if so and so has something to do with it.” And I was
all excited to read on and find out. Then, to my dismay, the very
next sentence in the book was the main character helpfully musing to
her self, “in light of this clue that I was clever enough to
notice, I wonder if so and so has something to do with it.” At
first I thought I was just disappointed. Here I was all expectantly
comfortable with the thought that this book was going to provide me
with exactly the value I had hoped for, when a single thoughtless
remark revealed that I was actually going to half assedly scan
through the rest of it, too nervous to emotionally reinvest myself.
After a while though, I realized that underneath my disappointment,
how I really felt was irritated.
This was the moment for me when it
became clear that a good story is a conversation. The author is
supposed to set up the circumstances such that she knows which
questions you'd be asking her. Then she moves the story along in
such a way to answer your questions without just blurting the damn things
out. Imagine that you and a friend are
killing an afternoon together in a waffle house. She's telling you
this great story and you're about to ask her a question about it.
Then she hands you a cue card with a question on it that she decided
before hand that she wanted you to ask her. Maybe it's the same
question, and maybe it's a different one. It doesn't really matter.
What's important is that she doesn't care what you want to know. She
isn't telling you the story. She's telling herself the story, and
she thought it would be fun if you could watch her do that. Well it
isn't fun. It's demeaning.
The fact that a
good story is fundamentally an act of intimacy has gotten me thinking
recently. I already think that intimacy is the only avenue to
anarchy, and I might even get around to making a case for that
someday. But fiction is a way for us to commodify and mass produce
the experience of intimacy. With fiction, we have the capacity to
exponentially magnify and expedite the benefits of intimacy. What we
need is to start writing dime store romance and crime novels. We
need a thousand of these things that are just good enough to publish.
We need books that demonstrate people putting anarchist principles
into practice in their daily lives. We need to change people's
intuitions about what's moral and what's possible by showing them
realistic people and situations and letting them draw their own
principles from it. I'd love to get a group of people working
together on these stories. I actually have a completely grandiose plan about setting up a wiki to crowd source them. Send me a message if you're interested.
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